Sep 24, 2015
학생이 쓴 원문
Ki Sung-yueng and Han Hye-jin expecting baby
I think that it seems like this article is so short and includes unnecessary contents :)
1. What is so unusual about their relationship?
A> Han is 8 years ahead of Ki. In Korea, the age gap is not common.
2. How long have they been married?
A> 2 years of married life. I think that it is reasonable to have baby for the couple.
3. At what age do Korean people usually get married?
A> The average marriageable age is growing. Mid-thirties is common for man and early-thirties for woman.
강사 첨삭
Hello James!
It\'s great that you had time to do your homework even though you were absent. Some reminders:
1. Marriageable age (or marriage age) is the age at which a person is allowed by law to marry, either as a right or subject to parental or other forms of consent.
2. Don\'t forget to put an article before a singular noun. otherwise, make the singular noun plural.
examples: Mid-thirties is common for a man and early-thirties for a woman. OR
Mid-thirties is common for men and early-thirties for women.
Teacher Venus^^
I think that it seems like this article is so short and includes unnecessary contents :)>>>I think that this article seems so short and it includes unnecessary contents. :)
1. What is so unusual about their relationship?A> Han is 8 years ahead of Ki.
>>>CORRECT
In Korea, the age gap is not common.
>>>In Korea, that age gap is not common.
2. How long have they been married?A> 2 years of married life.
>>>They\'ve been married for 2 years.
I think that it is reasonable to have baby for the couple.
>>>I think that it is reasonable to have a baby for the couple.
3. At what age do Korean people usually get married?A> The average marriageable age is growing.
>>>People are getting married later in life.
Mid-thirties is common for man and early-thirties for woman.
>>>Mid-thirties is common for men and early-thirties for women.
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