Sep 27th homework

2024-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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I like it not only because I don\'t need to woory about sweating during swimming. This sport can be enjoyed even on a trip. People in all ages can enjoy swimming whether their jonts are good or not.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for doing your homework. You did great!

-Teacher Ash

I like it not only because I don\'t need to woory about sweating during swimming.

>> I like it not only because I don\'t need to worry about sweating when swimming.

This sport can be enjoyed even on a trip.

>>CORRECT

People in all ages can enjoy swimming whether their jonts are good or not.

>> People in all ages can enjoy swimming even if their joints are in bad condition.

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