september 2nd

I think that is not good idea. beacause teenager have to do study for their future. our society ,we have to take care of them. It need to good welfare system. so they don't need to get a job. and we have to pay more tax for them. because they are our future.

 Hello Ma\'am [이름]! I hope you are feeling better now. I am so happy to see another homework from you. I made the necessary corrections so kindly check them. Thanks! ~Teacher Shanee   I think that is not good idea. >>> I think that is not a good idea.beacause teenager have to do study for their future. >>> Because teenagers have to study for their future.our society ,we have to take care of them. >>>  Our society has to take care of them.It need to good welfare system. >>>  We need a good welfare system.so they don\'t need to get a job. >>>  So they won\'t need to get a job.and we have to pay more tax for them. >>> And we need to pay a higher tax for them.because they are our future. >>> Because they are our future.