\"Serious sport has nothing to do with fair play. It is bound up with hatred, jealousy, boastfulness
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No, I don\'t agree with him. I believe the real value of sport comes from fair play. Every sport player try to do their best under sport\'s rule and it makes sport games more exciting and beautiful. Also, If the serious sport has nothing to do with fair play, then there wouldn\'t be a dope test.
But, I agree that sport is war minus the shooting because every player try to win the games and naturally the atmosphere of the game becomes more competitive in a good way.
So, I like sport with fair play and the players\' enthusiasm.
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~ Teacher Tricia
No, I don\'t agree with him.
>> CORRECT!
I believe the real value of sport comes from fair play.
>> I believe the real value of sports comes from fair play.
Every sport player try to do their best under sport\'s rule and it makes sport games more exciting and beautiful.
>> Every sports player tries to do their best under the sport\'s rule and it makes the games more exciting and beautiful.
Also, If the serious sport has nothing to do with fair play, then there wouldn\'t be a dope test.
>> Also, if a serious sport has nothing to do with fair play, then there wouldn\'t be a dope test.
But, I agree that sport is war minus the shooting because every player try to win the games and naturally the atmosphere of the game becomes more competitive in a good way.
>> But, I agree that sport is war minus the shooting because every player tries to win the games and naturally the atmosphere of the game becomes more competitive in a good way.
So, I like sport with fair play and the players\' enthusiasm.
>> So, I like sports with fair play and the players\' enthusiasm.
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