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2023-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

학생이 쓴 원문

I provide serveral services and donations to others in my daily life. I donate monthly to the school my daughter graduated from. And I donate to an orphanage every month. I serve as a facilitator in an adule reading club. It is my social responsibility and pride as educator and doctor of Education.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, [이름]!

Your dedication will bring you to success!

-Hanna ^^

I provide serveral services and donations to others in my daily life.

>>Correct.
I donate monthly to the school my daughter graduated from.

>>I make monthly donations to the school from which my daughter graduated.
And I donate to an orphanage every month.

>>Correct.
I serve as a facilitator in an adule reading club.

>>I serve as a facilitator in an adult reading club.

It is my social responsibility and pride as educator and doctor of Education.

>>It is both my social responsibility and a source of pride as an educator and a Doctor of Education.

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