Seventh homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello! Teacher Lynn:)
Actually, I was imperious while I study speaking in English and had doubt that can I improve?
But,Today you gave me a courage that I can do it! Thank you so much!
I will always remember the sentences whenever I'm tired. : There is no rush when it comes to learning English or any other languages. It's better to take it slow!
If I can born in another country, I'd like to pick United state of America.
The reason is that people living there don't conscious other people's eyes although there are some exceptions.
Especially, The koreans ,like me, have taken them so much into consideration.
I don't know why they are so important.
In this reason, if I can born in another country, United state where it doesn't care whatever I do is right that.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
You are a teacher yourself so you\'ll understand the feeling of great satisfaction whenever you see your student/s improve even a little. So I\'m sincere in helping you improve your English proficiency. We can do this!
For us Filipinos small eyes look cute and we admire them so I don\'t understand why Koreans find their eyes ugly and that they have to make their eyes bigger through eye surgery.
~T. Lynn
Hello! Teacher Lynn:)
>> correct!
Actually, I was imperious while I study speaking in English and had doubt that can I improve?
>> Actually, I was imperious while I study speaking in English and had doubt that I can improve. [ Are you sure you want to use \"imperious\" in this sentence? Maybe you meant to use \'improbable\'?]
But,Today you gave me a courage that I can do it!
>> But today you gave me courage in believing that I can do it.
Thank you so much!
>> correct!
I will always remember the sentences whenever I\'m tired. : There is no rush when it comes to learning English or any other languages. It\'s better to take it slow!
>> I will always remember these sentences whenever I\'m tired. : There is no rush when it comes to learning English or any other languages. It\'s better to take it slow!
If I can born in another country, I\'d like to pick United state of America.
>> If I can be born in another country, I\'d like to pick the United States of America.
The reason is that people living there don\'t conscious other people\'s eyes although there are some exceptions.
>> The reason is that people living there don\'t mind about other people\'s eyes although there are some exceptions.
Especially, The koreans ,like me, have taken them so much into consideration.
>> Koreans like me have taken them so much into consideration.
I don\'t know why they are so important.
>> correct!
In this reason, if I can born in another country, United state where it doesn\'t care whatever I do is right that.
>> For this reason, if I can be born in another country, I\'ll choose the United States where people don\'t care whatever I do as long as it is right.
You are a teacher yourself so you\'ll understand the feeling of great satisfaction whenever you see your student/s improve even a little. So I\'m sincere in helping you improve your English proficiency. We can do this!
For us Filipinos small eyes look cute and we admire them so I don\'t understand why Koreans find their eyes ugly and that they have to make their eyes bigger through eye surgery.
~T. Lynn
Hello! Teacher Lynn:)
>> correct!
Actually, I was imperious while I study speaking in English and had doubt that can I improve?
>> Actually, I was imperious while I study speaking in English and had doubt that I can improve. [ Are you sure you want to use \"imperious\" in this sentence? Maybe you meant to use \'improbable\'?]
But,Today you gave me a courage that I can do it!
>> But today you gave me courage in believing that I can do it.
Thank you so much!
>> correct!
I will always remember the sentences whenever I\'m tired. : There is no rush when it comes to learning English or any other languages. It\'s better to take it slow!
>> I will always remember these sentences whenever I\'m tired. : There is no rush when it comes to learning English or any other languages. It\'s better to take it slow!
If I can born in another country, I\'d like to pick United state of America.
>> If I can be born in another country, I\'d like to pick the United States of America.
The reason is that people living there don\'t conscious other people\'s eyes although there are some exceptions.
>> The reason is that people living there don\'t mind about other people\'s eyes although there are some exceptions.
Especially, The koreans ,like me, have taken them so much into consideration.
>> Koreans like me have taken them so much into consideration.
I don\'t know why they are so important.
>> correct!
In this reason, if I can born in another country, United state where it doesn\'t care whatever I do is right that.
>> For this reason, if I can be born in another country, I\'ll choose the United States where people don\'t care whatever I do as long as it is right.
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