Shabu shabu is my soul food

2022-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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My favorite food in the world is Korean style shabu shabu. When my feel is so bad, eating shabu-shabu makes me feel really good.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann!  

That\'s really good! 

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My favorite food in the world is Korean style shabu shabu.
>> CORRECT

When my feel is so bad, eating shabu-shabu makes me feel really good.
>> When I feel bad, I eat shabu-shabu to make myself feel better. 

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