shameful with a rumble .

2010-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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Around 11 am, my boss and three of my co-worker was in front of my desk with me. my boss checked the file which I made. I made reference to three of my co-workers data. there was a wrong data by a co-worker's mistakes. as a result of the wrong data, my documents had a problem. my boss noticed it and gathered all of them. While checked it, suddenly my stomach rumbled. sadly, my desk area is very small. it has a smiliar size with small van. the sound from my stomach was sound like a thunder. ㅠ ㅠ I was not hungry. but my stomach moved like a big waves. it made me so shameful.

강사 첨삭

[이름], Things like this happen, and yeah it's really embarrassing. Hahaha! Take it easy and just laugh about it. I had experiences like this before and I think it makes our life fun. ;)   XOXO, Jenny   Here are some corrections:   Around 11 am, my boss and three of my co-worker was in front of my desk with me. >> At around 11 am, my boss, my three co-workers and I were in front of my desk.  my boss checked the file which I made. >>My boss is checking the files that I made.  I made reference to three of my co-workers data. >> I made references from my three co-workers' data.  there was a wrong data by a co-worker's mistakes. as a result of the wrong data, >> My co-worker made a mistake and it resulted to a wrong data.  as a result of the wrong data, My documents had a problem. >>As a result, my documents had a problem.  my boss noticed it and gathered all of them. >> My boss noticed it and gathered all the data.  While checked it, suddenly my stomach rumbled. >> While he was checking it, my stomach suddenly grumbled.  sadly, my desk area is very small. >>Sadly, my desk is very small.  it has a smiliar size with small van. >>It is the size of a small van.  the sound from my stomach was sound like a thunder. >> The sounds from my stomach sounded like thunder.   ㅠ ㅠ I was not hungry. but my stomach moved like a big waves. >> I’m not hungry,but my stomach moved like big waves]  it made me so shameful. >>It made me embarrased.      

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