SHARE IN AN ESSAY YOUR RECOMMENDATION FOR HONG KONG AND MAINTAINING ITS ECONOMIC STATUS.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think china have to forgive imposing the new security raw to maintain the special status - global financial and trade hub- at HK.
As soon as announcing that news some multinational corporation and invester had already left there to protect thier property.
And, G7 joined countries are having a meeting to put a pressure china and having a plan to help HK citizen by emigration from other countries like UK.
The reason why It is more serious than other things is social ideology differnce. Hk citizen can`t adat to socialism. In the different social, Hk citizen can`t be likely to live there.
As a result they will face with trade coflicts with USA. It lead to affect other countries economy.
강사 첨삭
Hi JM! You have yourself well abreast with issues concerning Hong Kong and its current status. I am glad you have given a sound thought on its condition.
We all hope that the G7 will decide for the well being of HK and countries affected with its issues.
See you again later.
-T. Donna =)
>> I think China has to forgive imposing the new security law to maintain the special status - global financial and trade hub at HK.
As soon as announcing that news some multinational corporation and invester had already left there to protect thier property.
>> As soon as announcing that news some multinational corporation and investors had already left to protect their property.
And, G7 joined countries are having a meeting to put a pressure china and having a plan to help HK citizen by emigration from other countries like UK.
>> The G7 member countries are having a meeting to put pressure on China and have a plan to help HK citizens by emigration from other countries like the UK.
The reason why It is more serious than other things is social ideology differnce.
>> The reason why it is more serious than other things is because of social ideology differences.
Hk citizen can`t adat to socialism. In the different social, Hk citizen can`t be likely to live there.
>> HK citizens can`t adapt to socialism. In the different society, HK citizens can`t likely live there.
As a result they will face with trade coflicts with USA. It lead to affect other countries economy.
>> As a result they are facing trade conflicts with USA. It leads to affect other countries\' economy.
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