Share something about the latest/last article that you have read or news that you\'ve heard. What di
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Good morning [이름]! Thanks for sharing this. Traditionally, women had to stay in the house and
had to do housework. It has changed nowadays, although there are still some wives who stay at home
to manage everything in the house. I have also read this article last week. Husband and wives share
equally when it comes to taking care of their children but wives still do more housework than men
although both of them think they do it equally.
In my case, we give and take. My husband does the laundry every Wednesday
and I do it also on Saturdays. Sometimes he cooks, sometimes I do. My husband is not lazy. He follows everything
what I say, but not to the point that I do nothing at home. We take turns. We have a schedule to do the housework.
So, everything is fair. It is also normal to have some arguments sometimes but what\'s more important is the love and trust.
~~Teacher May~~
The latest news that I have read is about doing housework.
According to the news, wives still do more household chore than their husbands.
Many married women think they share childcare duties with their husbands quite equally,
but they bear a greater burden than their partners in other household chores.
>> CORRECT
It shows that men involve more housework than what they used to be.
>> It shows that men do more housework than what they used to do.
However, the time men are spending is lesser than their wives did.
>> However, the time men are spending is lesser than what their wives have.
Actually, women didn\'t expect their husbands to share the housework equally from the beginning.
>> CORRECT
Their expectations were low, so they thought they were sharing it equally despite the time spending gap between them.
>> Their expectations were low, so they thought they were sharing it equally despite of their time differences.
In my case, I think that I do more housework than my wife because my wife works at night or evening every 2 months.
>> CORRECT
I am wondering if my wife think same to the news that I have read.
>> I am wondering if my wife thinks the same about the news that I have read.
We sometimes argue about the position of stuffs in the kitchen and cleanness of refrigerator.
>> We sometimes argue about the placement of kitchen stuff and cleanliness of the refrigerator.
It would not happen if one person do house chore.
>> It would not happen if one person does the household chore.
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