Share your most memorable dream you\'ve had.
학생이 쓴 원문
The most memorable dream I\'ve had is 6.25 war. I was an soldier in my dream.
It\'s very vivid so I am scared. many soldiers around me were dead. Actually, I think I watched the movie about war yesterday. I dreamed about the war. what do i did? I also dead by bomb. but I feel no pain.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Wow. That didn\'t sound good. :( I hope it won\'t happen to you again. Sometimes bad dreams occur if you are very exhausted throughout the day so I suggest that you shouldn\'t exhaust yourself too much. :)
-Teacher Elise
It\'s very vivid so I am scared.
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The most memorable dream I\'ve had is 6.25 war.
>> The most memorable dream I\'ve had was the 6.25 war.
I was an soldier in my dream.
>>CORRECT
It\'s very vivid so I am scared.
>> It was very vivid so I was scared.
many soldiers around me were dead.
>>CORRECT
Actually, I think I watched the movie about war yesterday.
>>Actually, I think I watched the movie about war the day before that.
I dreamed about the war. what do i did? I also dead by bomb. but I feel no pain.
>>I dreamt about the war. What happened you might ask? I died because of a bomb explosion but I didn\'t feel any pain.
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