Shawn\'s homework_1111

Thank you Shawn!

~Teacher Lucy

I think that this guidelines imposes are very good for most of children or teenagers.

>>I  think that these guidelines impose positive feedback to most children or teenagers.

because most of 10\'s are doesn\'t know the responsibility of addiction or freedom.

>> Because most of teens don\'t know the repercussion of addiction.

 So, adult is liable for teach them about responsibility of freedom such as make the guidelines.

>> So, adult is in authority to teach them to be responsible in following guidelines.

I agree that video games are a waste of time, but these days we can see the job about the game industry
such as creating the new games, doing the e-sports of video games and game critic etc..

>> I agree that video games are a waste of time, but these days we can see game industries creating new games, doing e-sports of video games and game critics etc..

 
 so, if someone has dream of working on game industry, it is not a waste of time.

>> So, if someone has a dream of working in a game industry, it is not a waste of time.

 but if you not, we need to guidelines of game addiction because it is a waste of time.

>>If not, we need guidelines to avoid game addiction because it is a waste of time.