She said

2011-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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A few months ago, I went to fortune teller due to worries about my future. Her work is primarily to give someone a good name. Some people believe that his or her name has an influence on their lives so parents put good meanings in their baby's name. 'Mi' means 'beautiful' coming from Chinese character. 'Jin' means 'real' and 'true'. It's made by my father. Sorry : b Anyway, she told me about the most of my personality. She said I hate to go step by step. I wanted to get something higher than what I did. I'm a little avaricious. The last of all she advised that I'm enough to get what I want if I know and do next step. When I heard what she said, I was so worried. But it was time to look at myself again.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Your name has a very good meaning. My name’s meaning is God the Father, God the Son and God the Holy Spirit. I was born on Trinity Sunday so my parents named me Trinity. Most of the time fortune tellers just give indirect advices so it’s all up to you to complete the idea. That’s just my opinion though. Hihi^-^ -Tiny^0^ A few months ago, I went to fortune teller due to worries about my future. >> A few months ago, I went to a fortune teller due to my worries about my future. Her work is primarily to give someone a good name. >>correctSome people believe that his or her name has an influence on their lives so parents put good meanings in their baby's name. >> Some people believe that his or her name has an influence on their lives so parents give names with good meanings to their baby's. 'Mi' means 'beautiful' coming from Chinese character. >>correct'Jin' means 'real' and 'true'. It's made by my father. Sorry : b >>correct! Haha why are you saying sorry?!Anyway, she told me about the most of my personality. >> Anyway, she told me about most of my personality. She said I hate to go step by step. >>correctI wanted to get something higher than what I did. >>correct I'm a little avaricious. >>correctThe last of all she advised that I'm enough to get what I want if I know and do next step. >> The last of all she advised is that I'm enough to get what I want if I know and do the next step.When I heard what she said, I was so worried. >>correctBut it was time to look at myself again. >>correct

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