She will come back !!

2010-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

A few days later, My mother who made a trip abroad will come back home. During her absence about three weeks, I was very tired because I had to take care of household affairs such as laundry, dishwashing, cleaning and boiling rice, even preparing a table spread with ritual foods. Besides my brother is very young so my father and I had to keep most of chores. Although we shared the chores with each other, we was very tired. After so long a time, I am very sorry to give her much trouble. I didn't know that she is very precious before, but I am just thankful to the existence of mom. "Mom, I am sorry all the while, and I will do it better. Love you" P.S I pray to homeco[이름]g in peace.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!...That was a very affectionate composition. Yes, sometimes we tend to ignore what our mother do for us but actually they have the most difficult job on earth. We must learn to appreciate them in every single thing that they do for us. We must show how much we love them everyday. Good job, [이름]! I am so proud of you.   A few days later, My mother who made a trip abroad will come back home. >>>After a few days, my mother who had a trip abroad will come back home. During her absence about three weeks, I was very tired because I had to take care of household affairs such as laundry, dishwashing, cleaning and boiling rice, even preparing a table spread with ritual foods. >>>When she was not around for about three weeks, I was really very tired because I had to take care of household chores such as laundry, dishwashing, cleaning and cooking rice, and even preparing table spread with ritual foods. Besides my brother is very young so my father and I had to keep most of chores. >>>>Since my brother is very young, my father and I had to do most of the task. Although we shared the chores with each other, we was very tired. >>>Although, we shared to do the household chores, we were still both very tired. After so long a time, I am very sorry to give her much trouble. >>>After a very long time, It was only now that I realized that I gave her much trouble.  I didn't know that she is very precious before, but I am just thankful to the existence of mom "Mom, I am sorry all the while, and I will do it better. Love you" >>>I never realized that she is very precious, but I am just thankful for the existence of my mom. >>>>”Mom, I am sorry all the while, I promise to do better the next time.Love you” P.S I pray to homeco[이름]g in peace. >>>P.S…I pray for my mom’s safe trip.

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