Shine muscat was best sweet fruit i have ate
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Shine muscat was best sweet fruit i have ate.
In my country, recently fruit of shine muscat is very popular.
because this fruit is very sweet and expensive.
It\'s a kind of grape and green color but bigger than nomal grape.
when i searched doing my homework.
this fruit is origin of europe not my country.
if do you have a chance, i recommened you try to this fruit.
i have tried to only one or two piece. because this fruit is toooo expensive so i have to share with my family.
I hope somedays FIona\'s family have a chance try to this shine muscat.
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It just looks like a normal grape to me - hahaha.
I will probably try this :)
Shine muscat was best sweet fruit i have ate.
>>> Shine muscat was the sweetest fruit I\'ve ever had.
In my country, recently fruit of shine muscat is very popular.
>>> It\'s recently has been very popular in my country.
because this fruit is very sweet and expensive.
>>> This is because this fruit is very sweet and expensive.
It\'s a kind of grape and green color but bigger than nomal grape.
>>> It\'s a kind of grape and green, but it\'s bigger than a regular grape.
when i searched doing my homework. this fruit is origin of europe not my country.
>>> When I looked it up while doing my homework, this fruit originated in Europe, not in Korea.
if do you have a chance, i recommened you try to this fruit.
>>> If you have a chance, I recommend you to try this fruit.
i have tried to only one or two piece. because this fruit is toooo expensive so i have to share with my family.
>>> I tried only one or two pieces. This is because this fruit is too expensive to share with your family.
I hope somedays FIona\'s family have a chance try to this shine muscat.
>>> I hope Someday Fiona\'s family will have a chance to try this shine muscat.
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