shoes
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Last week I had bought a pair of shes with my family. Brand is Reebok. The color is black and yellow. I had bought a pair of shoes for one hundred thirty thousand won. I wear shoes. I will go walking.
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Hello. These are the corrections on your composition. Please find time to read them:
Last week I had bought a pair of shes with my family.
>> Last week I bought a pair of shoes with my family.
Brand is Reebok.
>>The brand is Reebok.
The color is black and yellow.
>>Correct.
I had bought a pair of shoes for one hundred thirty thousand won.
>> I bought my pair of shoes for one hundred thirty thousand won.
I wear shoes.
>>Correct.
I will go walking.
>>Correct
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