Shopping 1
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When I go shopping, I try to make shopping list.
Since I have a I-phone, I make it on my cell phone.
It is a good way to keep my self from impulse buying.
I usually go shopping to the department store or big supermarket
located in my neighborhood.
As for me, I like going shopping by myself.
Since everyone has their own taste of shopping,
I think shopping with other person is wasting of time.
But sometimes, I go shopping with my coworkers.
When I go to my hometown, I go shopping with my mom.
I like it because she always pay for shopping.
When I pay , I use my credit card most of the time.
but Sometimes I can't use it, when I buy something in a small supermarket.
Then I pay with my cash.
But I don't like it because I can't get a tax refund If I use cash.
강사 첨삭
You are what we call a metrosexual.:) Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM
When I go shopping, I try to make shopping list.
>>>When I go shopping, I try to make a shopping list.Since I have a I-phone, I make it on my cell phone.
>>>Since I have an i-phone, I make the list on my cell phone.It is a good way to keep my self from impulse buying.
>>>It is a good way to keep myself from impulsive buying.I usually go shopping to the department store or big supermarket located in my neighborhood.
>>>I usually go shopping to the department store or to a big supermarket located in my neighborhood.As for me, I like going shopping by myself.
>>>CorrectSince everyone has their own taste of shopping,>>>Since everyone has their own taste in shopping,I think shopping with other person is wasting of time.
>>>I think shopping with another person is a waste of time.But sometimes, I go shopping with my coworkers.
>>>CorrectWhen I go to my hometown, I go shopping with my mom.
>>>CorrectI like it because she always pay for shopping.
>>>I like it because she always pays for shopping.When I pay , I use my credit card most of the time.
>>>Correctbut Sometimes I can't use it, when I buy something in a small supermarket.
>>>Sometimes I can't use it, like when I buy something in a small supermarket.Then I pay with my cash.
>>>Then I would pay with my cash.But I don't like it because I can't get a tax refund If I use cash.
>>>Correct
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