Shopping 1

2010-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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When I go shopping, I try to make shopping list. Since I have a I-phone, I make it on my cell phone. It is a good way to keep my self from impulse buying. I usually go shopping to the department store or big supermarket located in my neighborhood. As for me, I like going shopping by myself. Since everyone has their own taste of shopping, I think shopping with other person is wasting of time. But sometimes, I go shopping with my coworkers. When I go to my hometown, I go shopping with my mom. I like it because she always pay for shopping. When I pay , I use my credit card most of the time. but Sometimes I can't use it, when I buy something in a small supermarket. Then I pay with my cash. But I don't like it because I can't get a tax refund If I use cash.

강사 첨삭

You are what we call a metrosexual.:)  Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM   When I go shopping, I try to make shopping list. >>>When I go shopping, I try to make a shopping list.Since I have a I-phone, I make it on my cell phone. >>>Since I have an i-phone, I make the list on my cell phone.It is a good way to keep my self from impulse buying. >>>It is a good way to keep myself from impulsive buying.I usually go shopping to the department store or big supermarket located in my neighborhood. >>>I usually go shopping to the department store or to a big supermarket located in my neighborhood.As for me, I like going shopping by myself. >>>CorrectSince everyone has their own taste of shopping,>>>Since everyone has their own taste in shopping,I think shopping with other person is wasting of time. >>>I think shopping with another person is a waste of time.But sometimes, I go shopping with my coworkers. >>>CorrectWhen I go to my hometown, I go shopping with my mom. >>>CorrectI like it because she always pay for shopping. >>>I like it because she always pays for shopping.When I pay , I use my credit card most of the time. >>>Correctbut Sometimes I can't use it, when I buy something in a small supermarket. >>>Sometimes I can't use it, like when I buy something in a small supermarket.Then I pay with my cash. >>>Then I would pay with my cash.But I don't like it because I can't get a tax refund If I use cash. >>>Correct

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