shopping

2020-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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I prefer to go shopping alone. I use to go with a friend and husband. But most men hate shopping.so shopping with my husband is always not good. And it`s easy to buy impulsively if I go with my friend. At first, it was strange to go shopping alone. It`s got more and more comfortable to shop alone. I think I`m going to be alone later playing with more comfortable ones.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]~! Good day! Thank you for doing your homework. Keep up the good work as always Mrs. [Name]. See you in class later~

Here are your corrections:

I prefer to go shopping alone.

>> CORRECT

I use to go with a friend and husband.

>> I used to go with a friend or my husband.

But most men hate shopping.so shopping with my husband is always not good.

>> But most men hate shopping so doing it with my husband is not always good.

And it`s easy to buy impulsively if I go with my friend.

>> CORRECT

At first, it was strange to go shopping alone.

>> CORRECT

It`s got more and more comfortable to shop alone.

>> It got more and more comfortable to shop alone.

I think I`m going to be alone later playing with more comfortable ones.

>> I think I\'m going to be alone later, playing with more comfort.

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