Shopping
학생이 쓴 원문
I really like shopping. Because when I buy somethings, I feel like flying birds. I like buy clothes especially. Clothes can make me luxury. I usually go shopping third a month. I really like shopping but I don't have enough money to buy something.
강사 첨삭
Hello So Hee,
Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate it! See you again tomorrow!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
I really like shopping.
>>Correct!
Because when I buy somethings, I feel like flying birds.
>>Because when I buy some thing, I fell like a flying bird.
I like buy clothes especially. Clothes can make me luxury.
>>I like buying clothes especially when they are luxurious.
I usually go shopping third a month.
>>I usually go shopping every third week of the month.
I really like shopping but I don\'t have enough money to buy something.
>>Correct!
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