Shopping

2012-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I really like shopping. Because when I buy somethings, I feel like flying birds. I like buy clothes especially. Clothes can make me luxury. I usually go shopping third a month. I really like shopping but I don't have enough money to buy something.

강사 첨삭

Hello So Hee, Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate it! See you again tomorrow! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: I really like shopping. >>Correct! Because when I buy somethings, I feel like flying birds. >>Because when I buy some thing, I fell like a flying bird. I like buy clothes especially. Clothes can make me luxury. >>I like buying clothes especially when they are luxurious. I usually go shopping third a month. >>I usually go shopping every third week of the month.  I really like shopping but I don\'t have enough money to buy something. >>Correct!

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