Shopping 2
학생이 쓴 원문
When I go shoppng , I am really careful before buying something.
sometimes my shopping style makes other people annoyed.
But I think that my shopping style is very smart.
When I buy some clothes in department store,
I almost go to all stores and wear clothes as far as possible.
but I never buy that item immediately.
After looking around the shopping mall, I have time to think about clothes which I wore.
I think what clothes will suit me best
and I also search the item on the web by my cell phone.
If the item is cheaper on the web, I don't buy it.
and When I get to home, I order it on the web.
강사 첨삭
A thrifty shopper. Enjoy your shopping! I'll talk to you later! -teacher JM
When I go shoppng , I am really careful before buying something.
>>>Correctsometimes my shopping style makes other people annoyed.
>>>CorrectBut I think that my shopping style is very smart.
>>>CorrectWhen I buy some clothes in department store,
>>>When I buy some clothes in a department store,I almost go to all stores and wear clothes as far as possible.
>>>I almost go to all stores and fit the clothes as much as possiblebut I never buy that item immediately.
>>>CorrectAfter looking around the shopping mall, I have time to think about clothes which I wore.
>>>CorrectI think what clothes will suit me best and I also search the item on the web by my cell phone.
>>>I think about what clothes will suit me best and I also search the item on the web by my cell phone.If the item is cheaper on the web, I don't buy it.
>>>Correctand When I get to home, I order it on the web.
>>>and then I get home and I order it on the web.
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