shopping 2
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Among many stores, ‘Coups’ brand is my favorite shop since their prices are adequately cheap and the designs are suited to me. They sometimes cut their prices about 60-70% off. Thus I can make up for deficiencies without any financial problems. Secondly, shopping allows me to know the latest fashion trend. Due to window shopping, I can have a sense of style which is matched contemporary popular culture. Although I have no plan to purchase something to have, shopping itself is beneficial to broaden my sense. From that, I can coordinate my garments which are yet hung in my closet well. Also I can keep up with the trend. For these reasons, I would like to go shopping.
First day homework.
A. 1. pros and cons
2. odds and ends
3. ups and downs
4. a piece of cake
B. 1. pie in the sky
2. a drop in the ocean
3. face the music
4. gave him the cold shoulder
5. rags to riches
6. no use to man
^^:I answered the Q in an essay type today. So it is bisected.
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~Homework Continuation~
Among many stores, ‘Coups’ brand is my favorite shop since their prices are adequately cheap and the designs are suited to me. >> Correct
They sometimes cut their prices about 60-70% off.
>> They sometimes cut their prices for about 60-70%.
Thus I can make up for deficiencies without any financial problems.
>> Thus I can buy things without facing any financial problems.
Secondly, shopping allows me to know the latest fashion trend.
>> Correct
Due to window shopping, I can have a sense of style which is matched contemporary popular culture.
>> Due to window shopping, I can have a sense of style that matches the contemporary popular culture.
Although I have no plan to purchase something to have, shopping itself is beneficial to broaden my sense.
>> Although I have no plans of purchasing something, shopping itself is beneficial to broaden my sense of style.
From that, I can coordinate my garments which are yet hung in my closet well.
>> Correct
Also I can keep up with the trend.
>> Correct
For these reasons, I would like to go shopping.
>> Correct
First day homework.
A. 1. pros and cons
First day homework.
A. 1. pros and cons
>> Correct
2. odds and ends
2. odds and ends
>> Correct
3. ups and downs
3. ups and downs
>> Correct
4. a piece of cake
4. a piece of cake
>> Correct
B. 1. pie in the sky
B. 1. pie in the sky
>> Correct
2. a drop in the ocean
2. a drop in the ocean
>> Correct
3. face the music
3. face the music
>> Correct
4. gave him the cold shoulder
4. gave him the cold shoulder
>> Correct
5. rags to riches
5. rags to riches
>> Correct
6. no use to man
6. no use to man
>> Correct
^^:I answered the Q in an essay type today.
^^:I answered the Q in an essay type today.
>> Correct
So it is bisected.
>> Correct
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