shopping

2010-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I like shopping at the internet shopping mall rather than to go shopping at the department store. Product at the department store is luxurious and expensive. Especially brand-name product is too expensive. On the other hand, Internet shopping mall products are cheap and various. Sometimes It is too various product to pick so I exhausted. Oftentimes I like to go shopping at small shop when I buy clothes. If I buy books, I'll go to library to search books and then I'll buy books at the internet bookstore. But when I buy shoes, I go to shop.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I agree with you it is also very convenient and hassle-free. Enjoy your weekend. I can’t wait to talk to you on Monday, Connie I like shopping at the internet shopping mall rather than to go shopping at the department store. >> I like online shopping rather than shopping in the department store.  Product at the department store is luxurious and expensive. >> Products at the department store are luxurious and expensive. Especially brand-name product is too expensive. >> Especially, signature products are too expensive. On the other hand, Internet shopping mall products are cheap and various. >> ON the other hand, online shopping are cheap and you can have a lot of choices.  Sometimes It is too various product to pick so I exhausted. >> Sometimes it’s tiring to choose various products. Oftentimes I like to go shopping at small shop when I buy clothes. >> Oftentimes, I buy clothes online. If I buy books, I'll go to library to search books and then I'll buy books at the internet bookstore. >> If I buy books, I go to the library to search and after that I’ll order it online. But when I buy shoes, I go to shop. >> When I want to buy shoes, I go to a shop.

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