Shopping

2010-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I am man , but I like shopping because it helps me to get rid of my stress. Whenever I need something , I go to a big mart 30 minutes drive from my house. Since I am a health consious person, I usually buy vegetables and a salad there. They sell a good vegetable salasd at a resonable price. Sometimes I buy sushi. It is cheap and has a good taste. I go there a couple of times a week.

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Hi [이름]! Happy Friday! Wow! What a good composition. I am very interested in it because I like shopping too. Stay healthy all the time and keep on writing. Take good care^^ and talk to you later my dear. - T.Camille -   Shopping >>Correct I am man , but I like shopping because it helps me to get rid of my stress. >>correct! >>I am a man but I like shopping because it helps me get rid my stress. >>I am a man but I love to shop because it relieves my stress.Whenever I need something , I go to a big mart 30 minutes drive from my house. >>correct! >>Whenever I need something, I go to a big mart which is 30 minutes away from my house.Since I am a health consious person, I usually buy vegetables and a salad there. >>CorrectThey sell a good vegetable salasd at a resonable price. >>They sell a good vegetable salad at a reasonable price.Sometimes I buy sushi. >>Sometimes, I buy Sushi. It is cheap and has a good taste. >>It is cheap and it tastes good.I go there a couple of times a week. >>correct!

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