Shopping
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I am man , but I like shopping because it helps me to get rid of my stress.
Whenever I need something , I go to a big mart 30 minutes drive from my house.
Since I am a health consious person, I usually buy vegetables and a salad there.
They sell a good vegetable salasd at a resonable price.
Sometimes I buy sushi. It is cheap and has a good taste.
I go there a couple of times a week.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Happy Friday!
Wow! What a good composition. I am very interested in it because I like shopping too. Stay healthy all the time and keep on writing.
Take good care^^ and talk to you later my dear.
- T.Camille -
Shopping
>>Correct
I am man , but I like shopping because it helps me to get rid of my stress.
>>correct!
>>I am a man but I like shopping because it helps me get rid my stress.
>>I am a man but I love to shop because it relieves my stress.Whenever I need something , I go to a big mart 30 minutes drive from my house.
>>correct!
>>Whenever I need something, I go to a big mart which is 30 minutes away from my house.Since I am a health consious person, I usually buy vegetables and a salad there.
>>CorrectThey sell a good vegetable salasd at a resonable price.
>>They sell a good vegetable salad at a reasonable price.Sometimes I buy sushi.
>>Sometimes, I buy Sushi.
It is cheap and has a good taste.
>>It is cheap and it tastes good.I go there a couple of times a week.
>>correct!
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