shopping.
학생이 쓴 원문
My worst shopping I have ever had was in My youth time.
I was fourteen at that time, My mother took me a department store.
She want to buy some shirts for me, but I didn't want to buy it.
because I thought I had many shirt in my house.
so I was irritated about that.
I regret about it.
I was too young to understand my mother's love.
She just want to make me happy, but all I did was terrible response.
In these days, when my mother calls me and suggest that my family go to shopping,
I happily accept it. Of course I don't reject my mother's choice, even I demand some clothes.
When I go shopping with family, I appreciate having a time with my family and to get a new clothe.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you for your composition. ^_^ Well, we all have our own regrets and the good thing is that we are always learning from it.
I hope you will be having a great time with your family especially your mother.
Take care and see you in class!
Teacher Nina
My worst shopping I have ever had was in My youth time.>> The worst shopping I have ever had was during my youth.
I was fourteen at that time, My mother took me a department store.
>> I was fourteen years old when my mother took me to a department store.She want to buy some shirts for me, but I didn\'t want to buy it.
>> She wanted to buy a shirt for me but I didn\'t want to.because I thought I had many shirt in my house.
>> Because I think I have a lot of shirts in my house.so I was irritated about that.
>> So I was irritated about that.I regret about it.
>> I regret it.
I was too young to understand my mother\'s love.
>> Correct!
>>OR: I was too young to understand how much my mother really loves me.She just want to make me happy, but all I did was terrible response.
>>She just wants to make me happy but all I did was to give her terrible responses.In these days, when my mother calls me and suggest that my family go to shopping,
>> These days, whenever my mother calls for me and suggests for a family shopping.I happily accept it. Of course I don\'t reject my mother\'s choice, even I demand some clothes.
>> I acknowledge it happily. Of course, I should not be rejecting my mother\'s choice even if I refuse to buy some clothes.When I go shopping with family, I appreciate having a time with my family and to get a new clothe.
>> When I go shopping with my family, I appreciate their time and the clothes that they buy for me.
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