shopping.

2014-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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My worst shopping I have ever had was in My youth time. I was fourteen at that time, My mother took me a department store. She want to buy some shirts for me, but I didn't want to buy it. because I thought I had many shirt in my house. so I was irritated about that. I regret about it. I was too young to understand my mother's love. She just want to make me happy, but all I did was terrible response. In these days, when my mother calls me and suggest that my family go to shopping, I happily accept it. Of course I don't reject my mother's choice, even I demand some clothes. When I go shopping with family, I appreciate having a time with my family and to get a new clothe.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for your composition. ^_^ Well, we all have our own regrets and the good thing is that we are always learning from it. I hope you will be having a great time with your family especially your mother. Take care and see you in class! Teacher Nina   My worst shopping I have ever had was in My youth time.>> The worst shopping I have ever had was during my youth. I was fourteen at that time, My mother took me a department store. >> I was fourteen years old when my mother took me to a department store.She want to buy some shirts for me, but I didn\'t want to buy it. >> She wanted to buy a shirt for me but I didn\'t want to.because I thought I had many shirt in my house. >> Because I think I have a lot of shirts in my house.so I was irritated about that. >> So I was irritated about that.I regret about it. >> I regret it. I was too young to understand my mother\'s love. >> Correct! >>OR: I was too young to understand how much my mother really loves me.She just want to make me happy, but all I did was terrible response. >>She just wants to make me happy but all I did was to give her terrible responses.In these days, when my mother calls me and suggest that my family go to shopping, >> These days, whenever my mother calls for me and suggests for a family shopping.I happily accept it. Of course I don\'t reject my mother\'s choice, even I demand some clothes. >> I acknowledge it happily. Of course, I should not be rejecting my mother\'s choice even if I refuse to buy some clothes.When I go shopping with family, I appreciate having a time with my family and to get a new clothe. >> When I go shopping with my family, I appreciate their time and the clothes that they buy for me.

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