shopping and travel
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Do you like shopping? What do you shop for and who do you shop with?
I like to go shopping when I have some free time on a daily basis.
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because I am interested in fashion and I want to be more fashionable so I usually go shopping on weekend with my husband.
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Sometimes I go to lots of store in shopping mall with my friends. because I like to talk with them while looking around.
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When I choose the clothes I try on it and I take advice FROM them.
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Or >>> I get advice from them when I choose and try on some clothes.
after when I decided it I pay by credit card
>>> Then I pay ith with my credit card.
Shopping is like relaxation for me because I feel fulfilled after buying something wonderful for myself.
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Shopping is a good way to relax my mind and improve my mood.
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So I am able to choose and get great clothes.
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finally I like to casual clothes because I usualy them lots of excising.
>>> I usually shop for casual clothes because I can use them when I exercise.
TRAVELING
Most people want to travel these days I also like to go tripS.
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There are lots of beautiful cities everywhere in Korea.
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There are lots of beautiful cities everywhere in Korea.so I am able to to get beautiful places when they have a chance.
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I want to climb famous 100 moutain in Korea.
>>> I want to climb the famous 100 mountains in Korea.
One of them I want to climb the Hanra mountain which is located ON Jeju island
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It is the highest mountain and I can see beautiful scenery every changed season there.
>>> It is the highest mountain and I can see beautiful scenery every changing season there.
so I am able to see famous places and seeshore and I also eat fresh seefood and
>>> so I am able to see famous places and beaches and I also eat fresh seafood.
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