Shopping bag!
학생이 쓴 원문
If you take a shopping bag when you go to a shopping mall or market, you don\'t have to use paper or plastic bags to pollute the environment, you save money, and you can put as many shopping bags as you want.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
If you take a shopping bag when you go to a shopping mall or market, you don\'t have to use paper or plastic bags to pollute the environment, you save money, and you can put as many shopping bags as you want.
>>> If you bring a shopping bag or an eco-bag with you whenever you go to a shopping mall or market, you don\'t have to use paper or plastic bags to pollute the environment, you can save money, and you can put as many goods as you want in it as well.
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