Shops have various way to care or cure us.
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There are lots of therapy shop here in korea.
>> There are a lot of therapy shops here in Korea.
Shops have various way to care or cure us.
>> Shops have various ways to care or cure us.
these ways are differ from depends on the spot where you need to care.
>> They differ from each other depending on the area where you need care.
I\'ve been massage shop in last year with carolyn where masagist gave us pressure.
(pressure means the massage.)
>> I\'ve been to a massage shop last year with Carolyn where the massage therapist gave us massage.
When a client wants facecare, they use skin lotion and special lotion.
>> When a client wants to have a face care, they use skin lotion and special lotion.
>> OR: When a client wants to have a face care, they apply skin lotion and a special lotion.
when a client wants to get massage, they give comfortable mood using aroma and smell.
>> When a client wants to have a massage, they will use the aroma to give you a comfortable mood.
the important factor of good mood is temperature.
>> The important factor to have a good mood is temperature.
not too hot, not too cold, maintaining appropriate temperature.
>> Balance the temperature. Not too hot or not too cold.
It gives a good feeling.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: It would give us a good feeling.
Massage service people have to make client be satisfied in the meaning of good feeling.
>> A massage therapist must make their client be satisfied by making them feel good.
There are various ways to make feel better.
>> There are various ways to make you feel better.^^
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