short
학생이 쓴 원문
To make a long day short, I am reading books, talking on the phone, listening to YouTube, and so on.
However, it\'s not easy to make a long day short.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [Name] [이름]! Indeed, it\'s sometimes challenging to make a long day short, but I\'m happy to know that you have many ways to do so. Thank you for this composition.
~T. Jenna
~T. Jenna
To make a long day short, I am reading books, talking on the phone, listening to YouTube, and so on.
>>To make a long day short, I am reading books, talking to family and friends on the phone, listening to music as well as watching videos on YouTube, and so on.
OR
>>To make a long day more manageable, I fill it with activities like reading books, chatting with friends on the phone, engaging with youtube, and so on.
However, it\'s not easy to make a long day short.
However, it\'s not easy to make a long day short.
Correct, or
>> Nevertheless, it\'s challenging to make a long day short.
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