Short Essay 1 : Write a sentence for each of the following words for further practice.
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1.Courteous : I will pick up someone who is the most courteous in my class.
2.Renege : If you continue to ignore him, he will renege on the contract that was accomplished yesterday.
3.Circumstance : The circumstance is getting worse due to the bad weather.
4.Policy : You will be severely punished for violation of the policy.
5.diligent : The most diligent people will get a chance to realize their dreams.
+) I have a question about your last correction.
[I think that giving a chance to think of the disadvantages is a better method for the country.]
What “to think of the disadvantage is a better method” means?
Thanks! See you 2 weeks later! :-)
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Hello there Sir Justin!!!
A prosperous Monday to you!
You did a great job in constructing sentences suing those words I gave you.
I just made some minimal corrections below.
Kindly check them out.
See you in class!
~~T. Mona
1.Courteous : I will pick up someone who is the most courteous in my class.
>>I will pick up the most courteous in my class.2.Renege : If you continue to ignore him, he will renege on the contract that was accomplished yesterday.
>>Correct!3.Circumstance : The circumstance is getting worse due to the bad weather.>>Correct!4.Policy : You will be severely punished for violation of the policy.
>>You will be severly punished for the violation of the poicy.
>>You will be severly punished for viloating the poicy.5.diligent : The most diligent people will get a chance to realize their dreams.>>Correct!+) I have a question about your last correction.
>>Correct![I think that giving a chance to think of the disadvantages is a better method for the country.]What “to think of the disadvantage is a better method” means? >> What I mean is, it is an advantage if you have some background knowledge about the countries you are going to visit.
Thanks! See you 2 weeks later! :-)
>> Correct!
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