Short Essay 1 : Write a sentence for each of the following words for further practice.

2014-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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1.Courteous : I will pick up someone who is the most courteous in my class. 2.Renege : If you continue to ignore him, he will renege on the contract that was accomplished yesterday. 3.Circumstance : The circumstance is getting worse due to the bad weather. 4.Policy : You will be severely punished for violation of the policy. 5.diligent : The most diligent people will get a chance to realize their dreams. +) I have a question about your last correction. [I think that giving a chance to think of the disadvantages is a better method for the country.] What “to think of the disadvantage is a better method” means? Thanks! See you 2 weeks later! :-)

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Hello there Sir Justin!!! A prosperous Monday to you! You did a great job in constructing sentences suing those words I gave you. I just made some minimal corrections below. Kindly check them out. See you in class! ~~T. Mona 1.Courteous : I will pick up someone who is the most courteous in my class. >>I will pick up the most courteous in my class.2.Renege : If you continue to ignore him, he will renege on the contract that was accomplished yesterday. >>Correct!3.Circumstance : The circumstance is getting worse due to the bad weather.>>Correct!4.Policy : You will be severely punished for violation of the policy. >>You will be severly punished for the violation of the poicy. >>You will be severly punished for viloating the poicy.5.diligent : The most diligent people will get a chance to realize their dreams.>>Correct!+) I have a question about your last correction. >>Correct![I think that giving a chance to think of the disadvantages is a better method for the country.]What “to think of the disadvantage is a better method” means? >> What I mean is, it is an advantage if you  have some background knowledge about the countries you are going to visit. Thanks! See you 2 weeks later! :-) >> Correct!

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