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I want to change relationship between South Korea and North Korea. I will make two countries to one! In South Korea, there are many good engineers but little mineral. However, in North Korea, there are plenty of mineral. In addition, if two countries unite, Korean can travel Asia and Europe continent by train. I believe that Korea-Asia-Europe train can promote economical growing of Korea. Therefore, I want to change two Korea's status.

Hi Stella! Finally! I\'ve got the time to read your homework. :) Thanks for sending in a very insightful composition about the thing you want to change in the world. I think it is very important for the two Koreas to unite. After all, they once became one and they will achieve more economic growth when they get back as one again. Call you again tomorrow, Stella! Good night!^^ ~Teacher Alice I want to change relationship between South Korea and North Korea. >> I want to change the relationship between South Korea and North Korea. I will make two countries to one! >> Correct! >> OR I will make the two countries as one! In South Korea, there are many good engineers but little mineral. >> In South Korea, there are many good engineers but with little amount of minerals. However, in North Korea, there are plenty of mineral. >> However, in North Korea, there are plenty of minerals. In addition, if two countries unite, Korean can travel Asia and Europe continent by train. >> In addition, if two countries unite, Koreans can travel Asia and Europe by train. *Really??? I believe that Korea-Asia-Europe train can promote economical growing of Korea. >> I believe that Korea-Asia-Europe train can promote economic growth in Korea. Therefore, I want to change two Korea\'s status. >> Correct! >> OR: Therefore, I want to change two Korea\'s relationship.