Shorter Impatient

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I don\'t get impatient when I stay in long line. 

>> I don\'t get impatient when I\'m in a long line. 

I do say it is long, but I don\'t shake my legs or swallow saliva.

>> I do say it is long, but I don\'t shake my legs or swallow my saliva.
I do that when I face the result in few minutes.

>> I do that when I face the result in a few minutes.
Sometimes, I pretend to be impatient in order to explain how important it is for me to do that thing.

>> Sometimes, I pretend to be impatient in order to show how important it is for me to do that thing.