Should a company hire people with tattoos? Why or why not?

2023-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mika

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Well, I believe without the service field, it can do that. The service field should show a good impression to their customers. Of course, people who have tattoos need to cover that. Also, they will do that during an interview because putting the good impression to interviewer. I guess it depends on how to do on your mind.

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Well, I believe without the service field, it can do that.
>>> Well, I believe that without the service field, it can do that.

The service field should show a good impression to their customers. 
>>> The service field should make a good impression on their customers.

Of course, people who have tattoos need to cover that.
>>> Of course, people who have tattoos need to cover them.

Also, they will do that during an interview because putting the good impression to interviewer.
>>> Also, they will do that during an interview because they want to make a good impression on the interviewer.

I guess it depends on how to do on your mind.
>>> I guess it depends on what you have on your mind.

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