Should a person get plastic surgery to make themselves have a better self-image?
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Of course, That\'s why they should get a plastic surgery so that making a good impression to other people. This is too much information. My sister used to say that \"Mom & daddy, I want to get a plastic surgery for my nose.\" when we were younger. But, it didn\'t happen, my daddy always said \"You have double-eyelid even though your brother doesn\'t have it\" :)
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Of course, That\'s why they should get a plastic surgery so that making a good impression to other people.
>>> Of course, That\'s why they should get plastic surgery so that they can make a good impression on other people.
This is too much information. My sister used to say that \"Mom & daddy, I want to get a plastic surgery for my nose.\" when we were younger.
>>> This is too much information. My sister used to say, \"Mom and daddy, I want to get plastic surgery for my nose.\" when we were younger.
But, it didn\'t happen, my daddy always said \"You have double-eyelid even though your brother doesn\'t have it.
>>> But it didn\'t happen; my dad always said, \"You have double eyelids even though your brother doesn\'t have them.
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