Should a person work after graduation?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is hard to have a job in Korea so I think that a person is good to work after graduation.
If you would like to do something before having a job, I recommend to do those before graduation.
Especially, please go on a oversea trip before graduation. Maybe it is difficult to go later because you have no a lot of time.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for answering the homework today. I am glad that you make some efforts to excel in your English study. See you in our class! :)
- Teacher Sophia
>> It is hard to find a job in Korea, so I think that a person who just graduated should find a work right after graduation.
If you would like to do something before having a job, I recommend to do those before graduation.
If you would like to do something before having a job, I recommend to do those before graduation.
>> If you would like to do something before having a job, I recommend to do those things before graduation.
Especially, please go on a oversea trip before graduation. Maybe it is difficult to go later because you have no a lot of time.
Especially, please go on a oversea trip before graduation. Maybe it is difficult to go later because you have no a lot of time.
>> Especially, please go to an overseas trip before graduation. Maybe it would be difficult to go later because you won\'t have time for that anymore.
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