Should all apartment residents be required to follow strict rules like no pets or no loud music?
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Even though apartment is for many people and they should collaborate together and be kind to each other, those district rules can be barrier for some. Apartment is home for people who living in there and if they have limited choice, they can make apartment will be a uncomfortable home. Listening to music and raising pets is free choice they can make but if it harms other, they should think of other ways, but that doesn’t mean to limit everything. So I think the making rules about set up right amount of volume to not make other people feel noisy is fine but limiting all musics aren’t fine.
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Even though apartment is for many people and they should collaborate together and be kind to each other, those district rules can be barrier for some.
>>> Even though an apartment is shared by many people and they should collaborate and be kind to each other, some strict rules can be a barrier for some residents.
Apartment is home for people who living in there and if they have limited choice, they can make apartment will be a uncomfortable home.
>>> An apartment is a home for the people living there, and if their choices are too limited, it can become an uncomfortable place to live.
Listening to music and raising pets is free choice they can make but if it harms other, they should think of other ways, but that doesn’t mean to limit everything.
>>> Listening to music and raising pets are personal choices, but if these actions harm others, residents should consider alternative ways. However, that doesn\'t mean everything should be restricted.
So I think the making rules about set up right amount of volume to not make other people feel noisy is fine but limiting all musics aren’t fine.
>>> I believe it\'s reasonable to set rules—like limiting the volume of music so it doesn\'t disturb others—but banning all music is not fair.
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