Should beauty standards include people of all shapes, sizes, and colors?
학생이 쓴 원문
People has different standards of beauty. We must recognize the diversity of beauty standards.
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People has different standards of beauty. We must recognize the diversity of beauty standards.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Everyone has their own standards of beauty, and we should appreciate the diversity in how beauty is perceived.
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