Should beauty standards include people of all shapes, sizes, and colors?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that it is natural to include apperance in a beauty standards.
However we should think not only appearances, but also inner beauty.
강사 첨삭
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I believe that it is natural to include apperance in a beauty standards.
>>I believe that appearance is naturally included in beauty standards.
However we should think not only appearances, but also inner beauty.
>>However, we should consider not only appearance but also inner beauty.
OR >> However, we should focus on both inner beauty and appearance.
>>I believe that appearance is naturally included in beauty standards.
However we should think not only appearances, but also inner beauty.
>>However, we should consider not only appearance but also inner beauty.
OR >> However, we should focus on both inner beauty and appearance.
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