Should being rude be made a crime?
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I do not agree with this statement. There are two reasons why.
>> Correct.
The first reason is that it is fair.
>> Correct.
If somebody treat me rudely, I do not need to behave kindly since the person is not qulitified to do so.
>> If somebody treats me rudely, I do not need to behave kindly since the person doesn\'t deserve it.
The second reason is that it is innate to people.
>> Correct.
If people\'s feeling is not good, I think they can behave rudely.
>> If people don\'t feel good, I think, they can behave rudely.
As result, I do not agree with the question for this reasons.
>> As result, I do not agree with the statement for these reasons.
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