Should books be censored? Why?
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In my opinion, it is a hard problem to solve for us.
If we don\'t censor books, then people can be confused by many bad books.
But, if we censor books, then the government can show us only the books that they want to show for us.
Because of these reasons, I think we need to think about this problem deeper and get a solution.
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>>In my opinion, it is a hard problem for us to solve.
If we don\'t censor books, then people can be confused by many bad books.
If we don\'t censor books, then people can be confused by many bad books.
>>CORRECT!
But, if we censor books, then the government can show us only the books that they want to show for us.
But, if we censor books, then the government can show us only the books that they want to show for us.
>>But, if we censor books, then the government can show us only the books that they want to show us.
Because of these reasons, I think we need to think about this problem deeper and get a solution.
Because of these reasons, I think we need to think about this problem deeper and get a solution.
>>CORRECT!
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