Should boys and girls be in separate classes in school? Why or why not?
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Hello there Sir [이름]!
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You made my day! Thanks for your compositions.
All of your ideas that you wrote below are right.
I was supposed to go to a girls school. However, I explained to my parents that it will be somewhat difficult for me to adjust in college.
It is because I will not know how boys behave. I might be bullied in the university.
Thanks for your time.
Teacher Nina
Before I raise a child, I didn’t think deeply on having boys and girls together in school.
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I didn’t actually look into or weigh the effectiveness or pros and cons of having boys and girls together in class.
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I thought separating boys and girls in class or school is old fashioned and stereotype idea.
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I couldn’t understand people who opted to go to women’s schools.
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I considered them being so gender sensitive and somewhat have prejudice about the coeducation.
>> Better: I considered them to be so gender sensitive and somewhat have prejudice about the coeducation.
However, now as a father of a young kid, I began contemplating on which way is more effective for education and help young kid grow with balanced view and healthy emotional development.
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When children go to middle or high school, they come to realize the differences in both sexes and show interest in the other sex.
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Many students spend focus on their appearance and start to put up make-up.
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Even dating between boys and girls start in school and they often cross the line.
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It\'s the golden time for them to study.
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Regreting is too late.
>> Regretting is too late
>> OR: It is too late to regret.
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