Should boys and girls be in separate classes in school? Why or why not?

2015-12-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Before I raise a child, I didn’t think deeply on having boys and girls together in school. I didn’t actually look into or weigh the effectiveness or pros and cons of having boys and girls together in class. I thought separating boys and girls in class or school is old fashioned and stereotype idea. I couldn’t understand people who opted to go to women’s schools. I considered them being so gender sensitive and somewhat have prejudice about the coeducation. However, now as a father of a young kid, I began contemplating on which way is more effective for education and help young kid grow with balanced view and healthy emotional development. When children go to middle or high school, they come to realize the differences in both sexes and show interest in the other sex. Many students spend focus on their appearance and start to put up make-up. Even dating between boys and girls start in school and they often cross the line. It's the golden time for them to study. Regreting is too late.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!

Happy Monday!

You made my day! Thanks for your compositions.

All of your ideas that you wrote below are right.

I was supposed to go to a girls school. However, I explained to my parents that it will be somewhat difficult for me to adjust in college.
It is because I will not know how boys behave. I might be bullied in the university.

Thanks for your time.

Teacher Nina


Before I raise a child, I didn’t think deeply on having boys and girls together in school.

>> correct

I didn’t actually look into or weigh the effectiveness or pros and cons of having boys and girls together in class.

>> correct

I thought separating boys and girls in class or school is old fashioned and stereotype idea.

>> correct

I couldn’t understand people who opted to go to women’s schools.

>> correct

I considered them being so gender sensitive and somewhat have prejudice about the coeducation.

>> Better: I considered them to be so gender sensitive and somewhat have prejudice about the coeducation.

However, now as a father of a young kid, I began contemplating on which way is more effective for education and help young kid grow with balanced view and healthy emotional development.

>> correct

When children go to middle or high school, they come to realize the differences in both sexes and show interest in the other sex.

>> correct

Many students spend focus on their appearance and start to put up make-up.

>> correct

Even dating between boys and girls start in school and they often cross the line.

>> correct

It\'s the golden time for them to study.

>> correct

Regreting is too late.

>> Regretting is too late

>> OR: It is too late to regret.

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