Should boys and girls be treated differently on the part of the parents?
학생이 쓴 원문
Theoretically, we shouldn’t treat our boys and girls differently. Gender inequality is still prevalent in our society and part of the reason is because we consciously or unconsciously taught and raised our children to have them form a sexism. We often choose pink shoes and clothes for our daughters and blue ones for sons. We buy our sons toy guns and cars, and dolls for our daughters. Some scholars insist that stereotype gender roles have been created socially, not resulted from genetic traits. Biologically, men and women are different. Men could be stronger than women. However, the physical differences do not restrict women to do certain jobs only. Many jobs that were once deemed to be only for specific gender in the past are now challenged by the other sex. Until recently, young women were not allowed to join the military academy. These days, the term of “genderless” appears in the fashion industry. Genderless means androgynous appeal, deviating from the fixed gender type.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Sir [이름]!
Yahoo! The week is over again. Hihihi. ^^ I am so happy to end this week with you.
I hope that you have a wonderful weekend.
You are right. ^^ Women are already doing some jobs that only men do in the past.
There are bus drivers, cab drivers, welders and so on who are women.
I guess people don\'t stop enhancing their skills to be a better person and for a great future, too.
See you in class. Teacher Nina
Theoretically, we shouldn’t treat our boys and girls differently.
>> correct
Gender inequality is still prevalent in our society and part of the reason is because we consciously or unconsciously taught and raised our children to have them form a sexism.
>> correct
We often choose pink shoes and clothes for our daughters and blue ones for sons.
>> correct
We buy our sons toy guns and cars, and dolls for our daughters.
>> correct
Some scholars insist that stereotype gender roles have been created socially, not resulted from genetic traits.
>> correct
Biologically, men and women are different.
>> correct
Men could be stronger than women.
>> correct
However, the physical differences do not restrict women to do certain jobs only.
>> correct
Many jobs that were once deemed to be only for specific gender in the past are now challenged by the other sex.
>> correct
>> OR: Many jobs that were once deemed to be only for specific gender in the past are now challenged by the opposite sex.
Until recently, young women were not allowed to join the military academy.
>> correct
These days, the term of “genderless” appears in the fashion industry.
>> correct
Genderless means androgynous appeal, deviating from the fixed gender type.
>> correct
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