Should children be involved in household chores, or should parents do everything?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think children should be involved in household chores.
Children must not think that household chores are their parents\'s work.
Doing household chores, they can feel that they are one of the family members.
And it can help children get independence.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]! Your opinion is clear and well-supported with meaningful reasons. I especially like how you connected chores to responsibility and independence. To improve, focus on possessive forms (parents’) and making sentences sound more natural. Overall, strong and thoughtful response, keep it up!
-Teacher Wela
Children must not think that household chores are their parents\'s work.
>> Children should not think that household chores are only their parents’ responsibility.
Doing household chores, they can feel that they are one of the family members.
>> By doing household chores, they can feel that they are important members of the family.
And it can help children get independence.
>> It can also help children become more independent.
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