Should children be involved in household chores, or should parents do everything?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, children should also involve household chores in their home.
Education is divided at home and school.
house chore are education at home.
School can\'t educate like it.
Children must learn for personality.
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In my opinion, children should also involve household chores in their home.
>> In my opinion, children should also be involved in household chores at home.
Education is divided at home and school.
>> Education is divided between home and school.
house chore are education at home.
>> Household chores are part of education at home.
School can\'t educate like it.
>> Schools cannot teach everything in the same way.
Children must learn for personality.
>> Children must learn these skills to develop their personality.
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