Should children greet adults even if they don’t know them? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
In korea, these days, It is common.
Many children greet politly to me even though we’ve beeb never met before.
I think it is helpful for them when they are growing up, and to be adults.
We will have to meet strange persons.
The time that we meet new persons will come to them.
And also greeting makes us happy.
강사 첨삭
In korea, these days, It is common.
Many children greet politly to me even though we’ve beeb never met before.
>> Many children greet me politely, even though we have never met before.
>> These days in Korea, it is common.
OR >> Nowadays in Korea, it is common.
Many children greet politly to me even though we’ve beeb never met before.
>> Many children greet me politely, even though we have never met before.
I think it is helpful for them when they are growing up, and to be adults.
>> I think it is helpful for them as they grow up and become adults.
>> I think it is helpful for them as they grow up and become adults.
We will have to meet strange persons.
>> We will have to meet strangers.
>> We will have to meet strangers.
The time that we meet new persons will come to them.
>> The time will come when they meet new people.
>> The time will come when they meet new people.
And also greeting makes us happy.
>> Also, greeting others makes us happy.
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