Should cigarettes be made illegal entirely? Why or why not?
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No. It\'s because cigarettes make us unhealthy, but some people feel it is necessary for them. I think it is some people\'s item for resolve their stresses. And alcohol too. I think if cigarettes be made illegal entirely, alcohol also have to be made illegal because alcohol and cigarettes make us unhealthy and it cause something serious accidents.
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Good evening Daisy. :)
Thank you very much for taking the time to answer this essay homework.
I sometimes don\'t understand why some people think cigarette and alcohol are stress relievers even if they already know that they are harmful for the health.
Thank you very much for taking the time to answer this essay homework.
I sometimes don\'t understand why some people think cigarette and alcohol are stress relievers even if they already know that they are harmful for the health.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re feeling better and you\'re having a great evening.
See you in class later. ^^
~T. Charry
See you in class later. ^^
~T. Charry
>> No, they shouldn\'t.
It\'s because cigarettes make us unhealthy, but some people feel it is necessary for them.
>> It\'s because cigarettes make us unhealthy, but some people feel they are necessary for them.
I think it is some people\'s item for resolve their stresses.
>> I think some people people consider it as a tool to resolve their stresses.
And alcohol too.
>> Same is true with alcohol.
I think if cigarettes be made illegal entirely, alcohol also have to be made illegal because alcohol and cigarettes make us unhealthy and it cause something serious accidents.
>> I think if cigarettes are entirely made illegal, alcohol also has to be made illegal because alcohol and cigarettes make us unhealthy and cause serious accidents.
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