Should companies prioritize profit over customer satisfaction to reach a higher level, or vice versa
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I think that companies should prioritize customer satisfaction than profit. In short term perspective, prioritizing profit can earn money fast. However, in long term perspective, customers\' satisfaction and trust is the most important factor to improve company higher level. If a customer satisfies with an item or service, he naturally repurchases or recommands it his friends. And it results in the stable profit of the company.
강사 첨삭
Happy Midweek, Mary! You presented a clear and logical argument by comparing short-term profit with long-term customer satisfaction. Your explanation about repeat purchases and recommendations shows good business understanding. To improve, focus on natural expressions like “prioritize A over B,” and pay attention to plural forms and verb agreement. Overall, your reasoning is strong and well-structured, great work!
-Teacher Wela
I think that companies should prioritize customer satisfaction than profit.
>> I think that companies should prioritize customer satisfaction over profit.
In short term perspective, prioritizing profit can earn money fast.
>> From a short-term perspective, prioritizing profit can help a company earn money quickly.
However, in long term perspective, customers\' satisfaction and trust is the most important factor to improve company higher level.
>> However, from a long-term perspective, customer satisfaction and trust are the most important factors in helping a company grow to a higher level.
If a customer satisfies with an item or service, he naturally repurchases or recommands it his friends.
>> If a customer is satisfied with a product or service, they will naturally repurchase it or recommend it to their friends.
And it results in the stable profit of the company.
>> This results in stable profits for the company.
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