Should countries make vaccination compulsory?
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Happy Tuesday to you Sir [이름].
Thanks for sharing your ideas about vaccination.
It should be really compulsory.
We should always be informed to be fit and have a healthy life.
Even if some of the people are not informed, the government should do something about it, right?
Have a wonderful day.
Teacher Nina
I agree with the idea that countries should make vaccination compulsory.
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>> I agree with the idea that countries should make vaccination mandatory.
I believe that all of the countries around the glove want to protect their citizens by all means as long as their budgets and medical infrastructure allow.
>> I believe that all of the countries around the globe want to protect their citizens by all means as long as their budget and medical infrastructure allow,
In Korea, most parents are well educated and informed by hospitals when they give birth to their children about when and what vaccination is necessary.
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They are given a booklet, a sort of log book, in which they can check the vaccination schedule and vaccination history.
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In addition, there are public health centers that are funded and operated by the local governments at each district all of the country.
>> In addition, there are public health centers that are funded and operated by the local governments in each district all over the country.
You can get vaccination there at free of charge or at a very cheap price, depending on the vaccination.
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>> You can get a shot for free or at a very cheap price, depending on the vaccination.
However, there are still some parents who are not able to access such information or social benefits because they are so poor and undereducated.
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In some poor countries, infants or young kids are dying due to malnutrition.
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Vaccination could be extravagant.
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