Should criminals and morally corrupt people be prevented from having children by law?

2014-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

It will be too crucial and inhumane to deprive criminals or morally corrupt people of their reproduction rights. Preventing them from having children by law is similar to the collective punishment. Punishment should be limited to a criminal and not be extended to his/her family, relatives, friends or even a child to be borne. Reproduction is a basic human right. It cannot be taken from anyone and shouldn’t be. Although I don’t think some of people should be parents or were meant to be parents, but the children they have could become great people who contribute a lot to the society. We shouldn’t paint all the criminals as the scum of the earth. I am not just too emotional, nor sympathetic toward the criminals. In addition, our jurisdiction system is not perfect. We’ve seen so many cases that those who were ruled to be guilty were later found out to be actually innocent. We should be very careful about making a decision that is related to arrogating person's basic rights.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir [이름]!

Wow! Your ideas are fantastic!~

I agree with your ideas. Criminals are still humans.
They should be respected and treated right.

I admire you for your time and effort for sharing a lot of ideas in writing and in class.

Have a wonderful time today.
Teacher Nina


It will be too crucial and inhumane to deprive criminals or morally corrupt people of their reproduction rights.

>> correct

Preventing them from having children by law is similar to the collective punishment.

>> correct

Punishment should be limited to a criminal and not be extended to his/her family, relatives, friends or even a child to be borne.

>> Did you mean: Punishment should be limited to a criminal and not to be extended to his/ her family, relatives friends or even a child to be born.

Reproduction is a basic human right. It cannot be taken from anyone and shouldn’t be.

>> correct

Although I don’t think some of people should be parents or were meant to be parents, but the children they have could become great people who contribute a lot to the society.

>> Although, I don\'t think some of people should be parents or were meant to be parents. But the children they have could become great people who can contribute a lot to the society.

We shouldn’t paint all the criminals as the scum of the earth.

>> correct

I am not just too emotional, nor sympathetic toward the criminals.

>> correct

In addition, our jurisdiction system is not perfect.

>> correct

We’ve seen so many cases that those who were ruled to be guilty were later found out to be actually innocent.

>> correct

We should be very careful about making a decision that is related to arrogating person\'s basic rights.

>> correct

>> OR: We should be very careful about making decisions that are related to arrogating a person\'s basic rights.

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