Should criminals and morally corrupt people be prevented from having children by law?
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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
Wow! Your ideas are fantastic!~
I agree with your ideas. Criminals are still humans.
They should be respected and treated right.
I admire you for your time and effort for sharing a lot of ideas in writing and in class.
Have a wonderful time today.
Teacher Nina
It will be too crucial and inhumane to deprive criminals or morally corrupt people of their reproduction rights.
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Preventing them from having children by law is similar to the collective punishment.
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Punishment should be limited to a criminal and not be extended to his/her family, relatives, friends or even a child to be borne.
>> Did you mean: Punishment should be limited to a criminal and not to be extended to his/ her family, relatives friends or even a child to be born.
Reproduction is a basic human right. It cannot be taken from anyone and shouldn’t be.
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Although I don’t think some of people should be parents or were meant to be parents, but the children they have could become great people who contribute a lot to the society.
>> Although, I don\'t think some of people should be parents or were meant to be parents. But the children they have could become great people who can contribute a lot to the society.
We shouldn’t paint all the criminals as the scum of the earth.
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I am not just too emotional, nor sympathetic toward the criminals.
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In addition, our jurisdiction system is not perfect.
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We’ve seen so many cases that those who were ruled to be guilty were later found out to be actually innocent.
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We should be very careful about making a decision that is related to arrogating person\'s basic rights.
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>> OR: We should be very careful about making decisions that are related to arrogating a person\'s basic rights.
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