Should cyclists be reuired to take a safety course before riding in traffic?
학생이 쓴 원문
Should cyclists be required to take a safety course before riding in traffic?
My answer is yes.
I believe that the safety course will reduce many incidents rather than that we don\'t take a safety course. So, I\'d like to be common course in school because many students like riding a bicycle and a kind of this education will be good for us when we grown up. I think it includes for the course to
take safety equipment and keep the rule about riding a bicycle. If we know about these things, then we can be better riders together.
Hello. Elly
It is rain, today.
It is not the same as the weather of yesterday.
I wrote my thought about your question.
See you later, today\'s class.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi Stella,
Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay. :)
Thank you for taking the time to answer this essay. :)
I agree with you. This should be taught in P.E. class, isn\'t it? I hope everyone will wear safety equipment while riding a bicycle. Precaution is better than the cure. I\'ll see you again next week. Have a lovely weekend with your family. :)
- Teacher Elly~
>> CORRECT
I believe that the safety course will reduce many incidents rather than that we don\'t take a safety course.
>> I believe that taking the safety course will reduce many incidents compared to not taking it.
So, I\'d like to be common course in school because many students like riding a bicycle and a kind of this education will be good for us when we grown up.
>> So, I think it should be a common course in school because many students enjoy riding bicycles, and this kind of education will be beneficial when we grow up.
I think it includes for the course to take safety equipment and keep the rule about riding a bicycle.
>> I think the course should include using safety equipment and following the rules of bicycle riding.
If we know about these things, then we can be better riders together.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
OR >> If we learn about these things, we can become better riders together.
Hello. Elly
>> Hello, Elly
It is rain, today.
>> It is raining today.
It is not the same as the weather of yesterday.
>> It is not the same as yesterday\'s weather.
I wrote my thought about your question.
>> I wrote down my thoughts about your question.
See you later, today\'s class.
>> See you later in today\'s class.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT
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