Should death penalty be practiced in your country? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No. It\'s because I think kill prisoner is abuse their human rights. They have their own human rights for the human. I think just give them life imprisonment and if the prisoner is very bad person, then I will give some many chores of prison to them.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy.
Thank you for sharing your opinion regarding this matter.
Thank you for sharing your opinion regarding this matter.
I think you\'re right when you said prisoners have rights too and should be given a second chance to repent.
I hope you\'re warm and safe right now.
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
I hope you\'re warm and safe right now.
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> No, it shouldn\'t be practiced in my country.
It\'s because I think kill prisoner is abuse their human rights.
>> It\'s because I think, killing a prisoner is an abuse of human rights.
They have their own human rights for the human.
>> They are entitled to exercise their human rights.
I think just give them life imprisonment and if the prisoner is very bad person, then I will give some many chores of prison to them.
>> I think it is better to give them life imprisonment and if the prisoner is a very bad person, then he/she should just be given more chores in prison.
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